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Mar. 11th, 2007 06:43 pm
samsom: (helping the hopeless)
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Title: A Woman's Work
Summary: Cordelia has a bad feeling, and follows up.
Pairing: Uh, C/A subtext, I think. Sort of Angel/Darla.
Rating: R
Spoilers: Takes place during Reprise, AtS s2.
Notes: Completely off the top of my head, because once I thought of it, it wouldn't let me go.

~~

She doesn’t know what drove her to the hotel that night.

After everything Angel did, all the silence and cold indifference he’d heaped on them in pursuit of revenge, she’d pretty much wished him steady to hell, straight and true.

Good riddance, and, oh yeah, fuck off.

But she’d woken up from a restless sleep, sweaty and fearful, with his name echoing through her aching mind.

So she’d gotten dressed, took a bus, didn’t even call Wesley, which was stupid because what if Angel was in another mood to play ‘chicken’?

The hotel was dark, lit only by the lightning strikes that signaled an oncoming storm.

It made her shiver, the black windows staring down at her, cold and impassive like its owner. She took a deep breath and plunged into the dragon’s lair, opening the doors quietly and slipping in.

She’d taken her only stake, though she wasn’t exactly sure she’d be able to use it on him.

Some things went deeper than the bone. Angel lived in her marrow, her blood, and though the thought was melodramatic enough to make her want to throw up, she knew it was also true.

The lobby was dark, empty, but there was a rush of something in the air that tickled the back of her neck and before she could talk herself out of it, she was moving up the stairs, seeking out his room.

His door was closed, but beyond that, she heard a woman’s laugh like breaking glass.

Holding her breath, she reached out and swung his door open.

The room was half in shadows, half in moonlight.

The balcony doors were shattered and broken, flapping helplessly in the strong wind.

Darla was writhing underneath Angel, on his bed, moaning and raking his back with her nails while he thrust and thrust and thrust and god.

She really was going to be sick.

She blinked to clear her vision, and when the tableau remained, she reached into her bag and withdrew the stake as she walked quietly over to the bed.

Her mind was clear. It had to be done, or he’d unleash the devil on them all.

She kept her eyes on Angel’s back, watching his tattoo undulate on his shoulder blade, raising the stake over her head.

When Angel reared up, his head thrown back, she saw the absolute despair on his face, the tears tracking his cheeks.

She brought the stake down, between their bodies, and speared Darla through her dead heart.

Eyes flaring wide with sudden pain, she focused on Cordelia for one long endless moment before her body was swallowed by dust.

Angel collapsed onto the empty mattress, bouncing a little.

She watched as he turned over, moving like an old man, looking up at her with shock warring with disbelief. The sheet wrapped around his hips, his flesh the color of moonlight.

Even like this, he took the breath right out of her.

“C-Cordelia? What-?”

“Can’t let you take the easy way out, Angel. You’ve got to try, like the rest of us, because what else is there?”

She tossed the stake on the bed, turned and walked out of his room.

~
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Date: 2007-03-12 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] landrews.livejournal.com
Well, looky this! I pop in to check on you and collect an e-mail adress for feedback, and you pop up with fresh fic . The fear in this is so tangible, and Cordy's anger and Angel's desperation- I like your economy. What a difference in their world if things had gone this way. Thanks for this tragic little fic, Samsom.

Date: 2007-03-13 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
Everyday, I think about how it could have gone, if only *someone* would have taken the choice out of Angel's hands. Naturally, I thought of Cordy.

Thanks for liking it:D

Date: 2007-03-12 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damnskippytoo.livejournal.com
Can you just rewrite the show starting with IWRY? :)

Damn, that would have been a great scene and so unexpected. Take that, JW and your 'gotcha' moments! Loved it!! :)

Date: 2007-03-12 05:23 am (UTC)
ext_2333: "That's right,  people, I am a constant surprise." (happy reader)
From: [identity profile] makd.livejournal.com
I'd like to second what [livejournal.com profile] damnskippytoo suggested.

What a totally different - and still great - show that would've been! No Connor, No AtS S4 mess, No Jasmine, No Horror of condelia.


And I love ballsy Cordy. ::loves:: her.

Date: 2007-03-13 01:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
I love me some ballsy Cordy too :D

The girl who made Lyle Gorch back off wouldn't have hesitated to stake Darla, given a chance. And then we'd still have Cordy, and no Jasmine, no Concord. My eyes still *bleed* when I think about that. Ugh.

Thanks for liking it:D

Date: 2007-03-13 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
Thanks :D

I'd love to rewrite that scene. I know Connor is liked by some, but mystically conceived babies - gah. So done with them. There were so many avenues for the writers to explore, like helping the helpless and Angel's hopeless redemption - they didn't *have* to make him a father, at least not yet anyway.

::hops off soapbox::

Date: 2007-03-12 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] califi.livejournal.com
Absolutely excellent piece, M.

The twist was completely unexpected- and packed an almost tangeable punch. *bows down*

Would love to see the repercussions of this scene ... but then, I say this about all your standalones and drabbles. They just make you need to ask/beg/bribe/threaten you for more, :P

Fantastic.

Date: 2007-03-13 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
Sometimes, I like to write possessive Cordelia. Angel's all lost and helpless, but Cordelia is decisive, and she's gonna take care of Angel, any way she has to. Including taking the choice out of his hands. *nods* He couldn't stake Darla, so she did it.

Date: 2007-03-12 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gabs186.livejournal.com
Some things went deeper than the bone. Angel lived in her marrow, her blood, and though the thought was melodramatic enough to make her want to throw up, she knew it was also true.

I don't think I can quite form a sentence after that. Truly perfect. What IS it about him? ;o)

I always love how you write Cordelia hun, with the beauty and grace of a queen, the strength of a slayer even though she ain't one, and the cattiness of a thousand tigers all riled up.

Fab. As always. ;o)

Date: 2007-03-13 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
Truly perfect. What IS it about him?

He belongs to her, he lives in her blood. She's going to make the right choice for him when he can't. She saves him.

Thanks for likin' it, babe. *licks*

Date: 2007-03-21 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katiesangels.livejournal.com
Possessive and action girl Cordy -- so good. I like when she takes the initiative. Loved it all!

Date: 2007-03-21 07:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samsom.livejournal.com
Thanks sweetie.

I love initiative!Cordy, taking charge and taking care of Angel. I don't know why I don't write her more often.

*smooch*

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